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doglessinny Joined: 24 Feb 2006 Total posts: 1592 Location: Rochester,NY Age: 20 Gender: Female |
 Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 5:11 pm
Post subject: Read this poem please. |
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Ok- I did write this poem. I just don't want my teacher to think I got it off the internet.
"Those last minutes they had
Everything changed
America cried with sadness and pain
The fear that was instilled
When the first tower collapsed
Nobody knew what would happen next
Mothers, fathers
Husbands, wives
Trapped in rubble, out of sight
People running
People crying
Thousands lay there hurt and dieing
Hangar 17 holds artifacts
Of those fallen heroes
From the past
Days have come
And days have gone
Memories of those whose lives are done
Patriot Day
A day to remember
This devastating day, the eleventh of September"
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| endlesslight |
Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 5:16 pm
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| Something tells me you wrote this poem. It's really beautiful and touching. Thanks for sharing it by the way. That time well never be forgotten. |
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| kristina |
Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 5:18 pm
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| im just assuming you wrote it, since you asked. |
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| doglessinny Joined: 24 Feb 2006 Total posts: 1592 Location: Rochester,NY Age: 20 Gender: Female |
Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 5:24 pm
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| kristina wrote: | | im just assuming you wrote it, since you asked. |
Alright well yeah I did.
 
I just wanted to see if it sounded/looked like I got it off the internet. I wrote it for Social Studies and its due tomorrow-and I just didn't want my teacher to think I found it on the internet.
Thanks!
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| kristina |
Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 5:32 pm
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if your teacher ever thought you found it on the net, that would be a good thing, because that means she thought it was too good to have been written by you right?
i think its good. if she thought it wasnt yours, you could tell her, to TRY and find it on the net.
Posted Thu Sep 14, 2006 5:33 pm:
lol, what if she googled it and found this!? |
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| doglessinny Joined: 24 Feb 2006 Total posts: 1592 Location: Rochester,NY Age: 20 Gender: Female |
Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 5:36 pm
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| kristina wrote: | if your teacher ever thought you found it on the net, that would be a good thing, because that means she thought it was too good to have been written by you right?
i think its good. if she thought it wasnt yours, you could tell her, to TRY and find it on the net.
Posted Thu Sep 14, 2006 5:33 pm:
lol, what if she googled it and found this!? |
That would be kind of funny!
Then I'd have to tell her the whole story!
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| Reesie's Mom |
Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 7:03 pm
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| Excellent poem...I wish I was talented! |
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